Very interesting layout! It draws the eye very well and looks awesome! I love the guns-with-wings symbol.
I would like to make the suggestion that you make sure you put your two "main" focus characters on the outer-most, biggest sections. I know you've made a lot of changes to the idea of this over the last few weeks/months, and I'm sure I haven't kept up well enough, but your premium billing goes to those biggest section. So just make sure you've got who you want in the spotlight.
You are absolutely right... It even works alot more taking into acount how oposite they will actually play.
I was paying more atention to having a guy/girl/guy/girl rythm and grouping them as the less formal on one side and the more formal on the other.
I have to redo it for the final work anyway to clean up the image and give the stroke outline the same color as the logo, to I might as well. Also I have to use the new "Angel" image. Changed a couple things on her.