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Bishop in Cross Assault Suit by Dalilean Bishop in Cross Assault Suit by Dalilean
After a short break to get my ideas in order and re-evaluate the look and story of Gladius Dei, I came to a conclusion that it was a bit to tame. The characters were to “typical” and stereotyped for my taste. So I decided to go a bit more extreme on them. Using some of the inspirations and ideas I had when I was rethinking the Zorro story, I came to this concept, a stylized future based on the DieselPunk/SteamPunk stylings.

And so I give you the first of these new versions.

This is Deacon Cross in his Combat Suit.

Originally looking like this:
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I felt he look to standard, to “the token big black guy of the team”. Now he is going to be the team’s armourer. Stuck in a wheelchair, he goes to combat in this Deisel Powered combat suit.

For more info see:
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Raze-n-Burn Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011
You had me at Dieselpunk/Steampunk. lol
Very cool. Shame he doesn't look like Tery Crews any more but perhaps that's for the best.
I'm going to have to look into this "stylized future" of yours. :)
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Mito-x Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2011
that way you can apresiate the man in action and the meca in action.
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Dalilean Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
The problem with that is each character looses it's individuality and role. Faith is a fast pace acrobatic action shooter. Angel is that long range patient sniper. Deacon is the driver. Bishop is the slow wrecking ball. If you have him out of the armour, it would just be a typical hard hitter. Sometimes moving to the edge of extremes can individualize a character.
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Mito-x Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2011
I see...
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Mito-x Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2011
Im not into meka, In fackt I like te original desing. So , I was thinkin, What if the sute is a special abilitie, some temporal bust.
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Lupus-Ferus Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2011
The art is good, but a cross on a jack feels a bit too Menoth-like I'm afraid.
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Militant-Jester Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2011   General Artist
Wow - love the concept. Way less cliched. Props!

Although, it would be really important to inform the audience by having him come out of the mech and get in a wheel chair, maybe show off his stumps...?

Anyways. Awesome stuff!
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pittstop Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2011
the red and the cross sell bishop to me, the black sells bad ass. When I saw the thumb though the shape felt familiar but I'm not sure from where - but overall a fantastic design.
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Dalilean Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Ironically I have another color scheme that I tried. Something more washed Green and Greys. It looked like something out of Mech Warrior.
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Dalilean Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
It is part Warjack, part AT-43, part ww2 aircraft.

Personally I love the proportions of the Warjacks. The original hands were based proportionally similar to the Kador Hands. They are bigger than the rest (except for Cryx, but those are claws.) and feel like they have Brass knuckles on them.

What I wanted to make sure was to stay clear from the Anime Mecha look. Nothing wrong with Anime Mecha's but that's not what I was going for.
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v00d0013 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011
I have to agree with Amakoro, it looks as if there's just enough of a change from a Khadoran warjack to not infringe on copyrighted material.
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Arcel-Windwing Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011
Awesome mecha armor suite
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Amakoro Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011
The suit looks very similar to a Khador warjack from Privateer Press. Did you pull inspiration from there to help design the suit?
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Leadmill Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011
This is awesome!
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Silverlion Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011
Awesome coloring. I like the idea of changing things from the stereotypical, I'm just not sure a "guy in wheelchair who makes weapons," isn't also stereotypical.

Now a blind guy? Maybe. A woman armorer? Maybe.

Keep trying to move out of the box.

Awesome stuff otherwise though.
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Dalilean Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Usually they place the Token Black Guy as either the Big Guy or the "Magic mentor". I want to keep Bishop as the heavy hitter, vs. faith being the quick shooter. Thing is if I don't want to make the Armour too big, I need to lose the driver's legs. There is no room for them! If not, the Mech would need to be about 25% bigger, if not more!

I just felt that Bishop started to look too much like Barret from Final Fantasy or Cole Train in Gears of War. Hell, even the A-Team had BA Baracus. Now, a not so big mechanic that lost his legs when the car fell on them! And now pilots a Wrecking ball! Not the same thing.

As for the Wheelchair, I am thinking of making something that has that 50's hotrod feel to it.
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Silverlion Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2011
I feel its an additional archetype (BA fits both strong guy and armorer, hence why we get it so often today.)

No worries if your happy with it.
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Dalilean Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, but a "strong guy" resulting from an armour suit is not the same as say Jaxs from Mortal Kombat. Apparently the only way a black guy gets into a video game team is if he is as large as a freezer. Mine isn't. Mine DRIVES the freezer!
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iceofwolf Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
The coloring looks gooood, man. And I like the new direction you're taking the characters.
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Dalilean Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks, Just hope the rest are as well liked because some are changing quite a bit.
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iceofwolf Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Well, I'll keep an eye on what you do with Faith. She's still my favorite. :)
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Dalilean Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Put up a WIP of Faith. Let me know how you like it.
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